Archive | March 22, 2013

disappointing storyline

The Erotic Dark (A BDSM Erotica Novel) Nina Lane

I bought this book after seeing it recommended on another site. Whether I buy books or receive ARC’s the review is the same – always my honest opinion. I don’t gush and give false praise – I don’t believe that helps readers or authors so what you read is what I truly feel about a book.

Lydia is seeking escape to avoid being caught for embezzling her firm and embarrassing her family, affecting their careers and happiness. Preston, her childhood friend promises to help her if she gives total control of herself to him. He takes her to a secluded island where she becomes a …not sure what term to use, sex slave doesn’t seem right exactly but in essence that’s what she is. Preston and his colleagues Gabriel and Kruin use and punish Lydia as they wish and she hates it at first but learns that objecting just brings further punishment. They’re a dark trio and each have their own ways of treating her – I wonder what’s in their backgrounds to affect them this way. We learn about Preston and his motives but not the other two. Gradually Lydia finds a sort of peace but them a party is planned….

I didn’t really gell with any of the characters, and I think that’s what’s affected my enjoyment of this novel. The storyline seemed to have been created as a vehicle for sex scenes of submission, group sex, whippings, canings and spankings. To me this is the wrong way round and the story is the main focus. I’m not offended by graphic sex but to be erotic and sensual one needs to empathise with the characters and I felt disembodied from them.

If you just want to read about some BDSM sex and don’t need the emotion that goes with eroticism then this book is fine – for me it didn’t work. The story was promising but thin and the sex very unemotional. The characters had redeemed themselves a bit by the end but that was too late for me – I really didn’t like any of them by then. I’ve never read any works by Nina – possibly this is just a one off and her other books are more erotic, I don’t know but its gone from my kindle now as I’ll not want to read it again. There’s a warning about the sex on the description so please take note – though I don’t agree that its hot, raunchy sex the rest is accurate.

At £1.95 for 197 pages its ok value wise but only if its the type of book you want. If you want a decent story this is not your book, if you want page after page of BDSM sex it is.

Stars: well, sorry but for me its just 2 stars, its well written technically but I simply didn’t like the content.



second in a great paranormal series

Shifting Selves Mia Marshall

I received this from the author in return for an honest review. I don’t gush and give false praise – I don’t believe that helps readers or authors so what you read is what I truly feel about a book.

I love books with romance and paranormal elements and there’s any number about vampires and shape shifters but far fewer involve people with talents derived from the Classical Elements – air, fire, water, earth. I read first in a popular series some years back that I didn’t enjoy and this put me off until recently when I found the amazing series Elemental Mysteries by Elizabeth Hunter. Then I saw a description of this book and it hooked me in. Its written very much in the mould of the Hunter series, with people having talents derived from the elements and contains shape-shifters but no vampires..so far anyway 🙂

I loved book one and its not often I rate a five star review to the first in a series but it was just That Good, so when I saw book two on Netgalley I was eager to review it. I wasn’t let down, once again Mia has brought together the basic group and added in some new people. There’s danger and mystery at every turn, gradually the plot emerges but as it dies it brings forward further surprises. The book takes up a month after the end of the last one.

Aidan learned at end of last book that as well as her water element she also has fire – she needs to learn to control her emotions so her Fire element is kept in check – without that control she faces a future of possible insanity, and if word gets out the Kill order will be given. She’s back in the mountain cabin with sister Sera, cat shifter Simon and earth element Vivian. She wants to see Mac (bear shifter) again after their kiss…but he’s so far been avoiding her. A phone call from the FBI secret division sets the team on the path of yet another mystery. What seems like a simple shifter runaway turns into danger for them all and betrayal yet again from someone close. Her family – water element mother and newly discovered, hot tempered, manipulative fire element father get involved in this case. They’re both keen to try to entice Aidan into a quieter life to ensure her sanity but Aidan feels she’s been lied to by them and is determined to keep her independence.

I love Aidan’s sense of humour – where she says she’s fine with bad language but please don’t use the “E” word (exercise) and her snarky comments that often come out at just the wrong moment ( I know just how she feels when the mouth runs ahead of the brain…) Sera is a great foil for her and is trying hard to keep Aidan calm. She and Aiden were best friends for many years and work together really well, seeing to know what the other is thinking and delegating tasks best suited to each other. Sera is also a “take charge” person and yet there’s never any conflict between her and Aiden about what to do, where they disagree they work it out between them. Simon is his usual enigmatic self – I love the way his speech is so oddly formal – its suits him perfectly, and then there’s computer whiz Viv, and once again her skills come into play as an essential part of the novel. The FBI lads are not in evidence mush, but always there in the background The team face life threatening situations yet again but manage to come through – though not unscathed and I want to see how Mia gets them working together in the next book. The characters – despite being supernatural – feel so real with all the petty squabbles and fallouts that real people have. I feel as if I’m there with them.

The POV varies from being written by Aidan at some times to third person at others but it all works seamlessly and never feels disjointed. Once again I was surprised at the culprit and how Aidan and Co resolved the issues. Mia’s writing is so gripping, and the story is very intense and yet she makes it easy to follow what’s happening. There are no horrible plots holes, no awful cliffhanger ending and its a book that will join book one on my keepers list for re reading.

Release date is April 16th 2013, and though I don’t have ebook price I can say the length is great. A nice solid long read for those like me who want a book to really get engrossed in and taken to another world .

Stars: full five again – faultless : )

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