The Start of Something Good, Stay Book 1, Jennifer Probst
Genre: General Fiction ( adult), Romance
I’ve read and enjoyed several of Jennifer’s stories now, had one that didn’t fit and sadly this one makes two. I just didn’t like Mia right from the start. Her ideals are solid and to be admired but her nature, well, she came over as arrogant, obsessed over appearances, self important, impatient of others, a totally dislikeable, unsympathetic character and for me that’s a huge problem. I got to 35% and ended skim reading the rest as I was just so cross with her.
The characters as a whole didn’t feel real to me, very stereotypical, and false, from Ethan and his family to the people who stayed at the B&B. As for Chloe – she’s 19 for heavens sake, why isn’t she being made to take responsibility for her actions, why does she need Mia there as some kind of baby sitter. She’s an adult but acted like she was 13 and was treated that way, and it really irritated me. At 19 I was married and had my first child, and no way would I have expected my parents to act as Chloe’s dad did, I was treated as an adult and acted as one, that’s how it should be.
Sadly those issues overrode the whole romance for me and made the book a fail.
Stars: Two, sadly a fail for me but of course others feel very differently. Subjective taste books…we’ll never all agree.
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