Never Forget, Pamela Q. Fernandes

Never Forget, Pamela Q. Fernandes

NEVER FORGET by [Fernandes, Pamela Q.]

Genre: General fiction (adult), Romance.

This is one of those stories I thought I’d like, but which I found a struggle to connect with. It started well, and despite too many irritating grammar/spelling errors I thought it was going to become one I’d love. Sadly it wasn’t, far from it 😦
I love the rich, arrogant hero who discovers another side to himself, love the under dog woman who’s got a core of steel, is able to pull herself up, love books with a supernatural side and this seemed all that.
Sadly Malachus has no redeeming features, I didn’t really understand him, didn’t know why he married Dara. It seems to be a combination of obligation to her brother and his father, and of course her wealth which he seems to have needed. Having married her he dumps her off at his semi derelict country home, and swans back to the city and his mistresses…nice man! Sadly he never really got any better, one moment he wants Dara, next she’s getting the cold shoulder for no apparent reason, and that continues again and again….
Dara, she’s 23 when she’s left at the country house, but somehow with her business degree and no money manages to transform the house, modernising and upgrading it, and make the falling apart business into a thriving profitable one.
Three years on and she needs more money to expand the business, comes to the city and decides she wants to be a proper wife while she’s at it. I cringed for her when she just took all the verbal abuse, the ignoring, the flaunting his infidelity. He says he wants a divorce but she decides she doesn’t so keeps on and on, trying to seduce him, persuade him they should stay married. He gives in and kisses her senseless ( not that she appears to have much) on several occasions then once more starts the verbal flaying, and she takes it. Once, just once, when she’s been drinking does she say a few words back, and fling a drink at him. By now I’d have the ink drying on those divorce papers and be dust.
It just didn’t make sense, why after three years did she want him, why didn’t she speak to him, try to do something before.? Why when she knows he has other lovers, and one consistently does she still hope to change his mind? I just felt she had no self respect, was a complete doormat.
I had such high hopes for this story, but it was just a constant will he won’t he, with a few odd supernatural elements thrown in that didn’t really add anything. The turnaround at the end could just as easily be one of his moments when maybe he does want her and then doesn’t, there was no real reason for the change, and I felt it all happened far to quickly. I felt that there wasn’t any real plot, no characters I could get behind, and for me the whole book was wrong.
It could be what someone else wants, but for me this is clearly an author to miss, her writing style and my tastes just don’t mesh. Sad, I was so hooked by the description 😦 and really disappointed it didn’t work out for me.

Stars: Two. Starts well, but soon fizzles out.

Arc via netgalley and publishers.

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